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I was chained down to the ground. People stood around me, but I couldn't see their faces; they were obscured by a thick, eternal darkness, darkness that took sight and made it stretch on and on forever. I needed to tell them something, something so important I would give my life to tell them, to make them know, to make them hear me, for just a second. But as I shouted, no sound sprang forth; I strained against my bonds, they asked what was wrong, why could I not speak, would I please stop struggling. I tried to scream, but produced only silence. I thrashed and flailed, but they showed only gentle, loving concern for my violent plight. I began

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The very fibres of my being cried out for something. Close the distance, I felt my body singing. Try as I might, I could only feel an inexorable, intolerable, inevitable fading...it could be saved by just a few words – words which bound lips could not produce. No mouth, yet must scream. Bound lips, yet must shriek.

Wordless, yet must produce sound.

This state is not unknown to me.

I awoke, tearing from one nightmare into another. Rock walls, sick trees, violet sky.

Breathe. Just breathe. Think of her, think of Arddun. Thoughts of the moon covered me with warmth, steadied my haggard breaths, slowed my jackhammer pulse. I t

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I vomited again.

Grass…it was grass. No, the ground was hard. Earthy. I was outside. Frogs and owls started calling. It was cold.

What the hell just happened? Only a few moments ago... I had been sitting at my desk with my LED lamp illuminating a 1:1400 model of the USS Enterprise, the final piece ready to glue to the rest of the ship thus completing months of work. A wave of nausea hit me like a spear tearing at my insides…spreading out like liquid ill, enveloping me with such force and speed that it caused me to double up. I tried calling for help, but p

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"I sure do appreciate all the help, but you sure you can keep goin' like this? You've been pulling double shifts for a while now… Not that I'm complainin'".
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~Rai-Actiene Sep 25, 2012

Based on the chess book, I assume Praetor knows about them.

~3p1cd3m0n Jan 5, 2012

In the last chapter, when Luna found out that Chester wasn't being banished, why couldn't she just stop clearing people's memories and explain what happened to Celestia? If for some reason that couldn't work, then after everyone had forgotten about Chester, why couldn't Chester just be reintroduced? I NEED to know![link] Also, When is the sequel comming out? If It's already out, where can I find it? This really was a well written story and I need moar.

~mango1964 Nov 16, 2011 Hobbyist Artist

I've only once read something more meaningful than this, this had a hand in changing me, shaping me, after this I have discovered I am a new person, a better person thank you Pride

~Vashthepsicho Nov 15, 2011

*Reading author notes*
wait, grimdark as hell?

... I think Ill stay with the first part only...

~Freekles1245 Nov 16, 2011

It´s not all that dark. Read CG, it´s worth your time. Trust me

~3p1cd3m0n Jan 5, 2012

Where can I read C.G.?

~Freekles1245 Jan 5, 2012

Just go to Pride's DA page [link] and look for Arddun Lleuad 2: Chwe Goleadau - Six Lights.
There is a link to the download of the story on the description.

If you allow me, i'll be glad to answer the question you've left on the Epilogue of AL, since Pride officially announced that he's gone, so he won't have any activity related to MLP anymore.

Well, she didn't stop erasing ponies' memories after she found out that Chester wasn't going to be banned simply because he asked her not to. Equestria was such a paradise, that Chester became terrified with the idea that his presence there could change that idyllic place and bring hate into their world, shape it into the dirty form of another human Earth. His choice then was to finish what they've started, and avoid any damadge to Equestria.

At least that's what i got from all of it, after several days reflecting about his choice i came up with this conclusion. I hope i've been of some help and wish you a good reading of CG.

~Vashthepsicho Nov 16, 2011

ok, I´ll trust your word...
but if I get depressed/traumatized as hell for reading it, YOU will have to cheer me up...

~Freekles1245 Nov 16, 2011

I´m glad you will, very glad. Seriously now, it´s worth every second.
If you enjoyed reading Arddun Lleuad, certainly you will LOVE reading Chwe Goleadau. Don´t stop untill the end, NO MATTER WHAT.
Pride left us a prime work as his last goodbye, so go ahead and read those 91K words of awesomeness.
Hope you enjoy, and if you want, tell me your toughts about the story after finishing it.
Good reading!

~Vashthepsicho Nov 16, 2011

im at 1/3rd of the story, and its awesome ^^

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