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Chapter 7: [link]

Here it is.

The story is marked as [Shipping] on EqD, and this is why.

This is the first time that anything like this has been attempted in the FiM fanon, and I have taken great lengths to make sure that it hits _just_ right.

Major credit goes to the numerous people I have asked to proofread and edit this chapter, and in chief, Chistery, whose additions and editing were utterly invaluable.

- Pride
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:iconmcmkii:
By the Gods, man! That was so... sweet. And romantic. You have certainly managed to go where no fim-ficwriter have gone before. I applaud you for your courage and for bringing a new meaning to "Forever a Luna".

In fact, I'm not even disappointed because of the cliffhanger!
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:iconpriderage:
You know, I don't usually appreciate my own work like this, but I'm quite pleased with this chapter. I look forward to developing the bond between Chester and Luna...

...and then putting it through it's paces.

- Pride
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:iconmcmkii:
Well, I guess you have to go where the story takes you. And besides, you've already posted a sneak-peak at the lampshade ahead. I'm sure it'll be enjoyable but for completely different reasons!
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:iconmcmkii:
I always suspected you'd look like Cmdr. Riker...
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:iconpriderage:
How the bloody hell did you know that?
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:iconmcmkii:
It was a qualified guess based on your DNA.
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:iconpriderage:
Implications...disturbing.
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:icontraceurbazil:
Nice Henry Wadsworth quote! The story is really enjoyable look forward to more.
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:iconneolight15:
you now for some reason I'm reminded of the song "Bless The Broken Road". I'm glade he knows whats in his head and see things for what they really are instead of what he see on the surface.
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