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Chapter 5: [link]

If you download the file from the right, you'll get the Equestrian Language version. If you can't open PDF's, then the Google Docs variant has the special font replaced by descriptive, normal text.

Anyway, I'll be monitoring the views/downloads rate to see if the .docx format is proving to be too annoying for people to bother reading, though I hope by this point you're so riveted that you simply MUST read it!...that's my hope at least. Cough.

Writing this chapter was marvellous. Lots of it got cut out - 3000 words, actually - and all because of one or two plot holes. But I'd cut out 100,000 words if it meant the story was better.

I genuinely hope for your good health and joy in life.
- Pride
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So, he draws life from moonlight? If that's right, interesting.
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Mood: Humor ~Amaster102 Nov 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Reading this I burst out laughing when I read the words Han shot first. I don't even know why. Great story btw
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:icondziadek1990:
Technological wreckage of an Iphone floating in a mist of magic... three excited infantile equine faces wrapped partially in shadows... collision of the two worlds.

My mental image of that scene felt truly epic. I was wondering if anyone here would be interested in drawing it - It would be SO AWESOME and I'd be grateful.
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FAIL!! Link to chapter 1 post below
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/ link to chapter 4
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Keep rocking brony!
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:iconxxrain8owdashxx:
why can't i read any chapter after 3-can someone send me link to chapter 4 to last chapter because i can't read any of em and this story is amazing and i want to finish it
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~SuperLeon Nov 15, 2011  Student General Artist
Cant read it the doc is gone
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:iconlmbednark:
I've been reading the story again (for the 3rd time) and when I clicked on the Google Docs link for chapter 4, it said the document didn't exist. Can you fix this?
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:iconlmbednark:
oh never mind.
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